YA Novel — ‘Cress in Waterbee’, Chapter 1, Part 1

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  1. Hi Joye 🙂

    I managed to read your first chapter only today, but here I am. I like it. There’s a lot going on and certainly things are moving fast in this opening. If I may say, maybe even too fast. In some places I wasn’t so sure what was going on exactly, for example when Romah meets the mob. It was mostly about motivation, the action is clear thoughout.

    There’s something that stopped my reading for a moment when I got there. Are you sure a doctor (a man) would deliver a baby in the 1880s? I’m not an expert in this field, but I think women (and of course I’m speaking midwives) would deliver babies up to the first decades of the 1900s. A man getting to the intimate parts of a woman in the 1880s sounds very strange to me. Of course, I might be wrong, as I said, I’m no expert, but you might want to check this out 😉

    For the rest it’s great. See you on next post.

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